Identify it
in your sentences. Writers get so caught up in their writing they
don't always make it clear to
readers.
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A train whistle blows as it rocks
past and I look up. (Grammatically, it is
the whistle that rocks.)
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Good health begins with daily
exercise. Watch for the ways it will
change you. (What will change you? health or exercise?)
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That is a common problem with my writing. A friend of mine in our writing group catches 'it' all the time on my manuscripts.
ReplyDeleteI'm grateful for the little Cec Murphey voice in my head whenever I am editing.
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