Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Common Problems (Part 21 of 50)


 Identify it in your sentences.  Writers get so caught up in their writing they don't always make it clear to readers.
·         A train whistle blows as it rocks past and I look up. (Grammatically, it is the whistle that rocks.)
·         Good health begins with daily exercise. Watch for the ways it will change you. (What will change you? health or exercise?)
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3 comments:

  1. That is a common problem with my writing. A friend of mine in our writing group catches 'it' all the time on my manuscripts.

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  2. I'm grateful for the little Cec Murphey voice in my head whenever I am editing.

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  3. Hi, my name is Heather! Please email me when you can, I have a question about your blog!

    HeatherVonSJ[at]gmail[dot]com

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